We have been writing narratives for our writing. My narrative was about Venus. In Venus all cars can only drive in water and fish look like hats. And it was about this evil guy named Lord Allen who wanted to destroy Venus with a very huge monster that's as big as the statue of Liberty. He had a death-ray and ninety million solders. But there were these three guys named Orian and Dippsters and Piper who will stop him. I liked that I wrote about a super villian and three super heroes. And then I saw someone else's narrative and I read it. And I think that his narrative was fine.
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